Tuesday 11 March 2014

My recount postcard

                                                         my recount reflection

I WAS LEARNING TO WRITE A SIMPLE RECOUNT IN THE RIGHT ORDER.  I FOUND THIS WORK EASY BECAUSE I U'SED GOOD SEQUENCING WORDS.I FEEL PROUD BECAUSE I THINK IT WAS GOOD.  MY NEXT STEP IS TO ADD MORE DETAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1 comment:

Ms M said...

Annika, I really enjoyed hearing about your experience on the luge in Rotorua. You have put a lot of information into a short amount of writing and included your feelings, which helps the reader feel connected to your story. Good job!