Thursday 22 May 2014

My Special Place




My Reflection
I was learning how to use my five senses and detail in my writing.  We were learning it to make our writing more interesting.  I felt confused with this writing because you did not want to add to much detail or to little.  Next time I will add the perfect amount of detail by putting the right type of detail in my writing.  I did not really enjoy this writing because of the detail.

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