Tuesday 31 May 2016

Autumn Poem




Reflection

In writing this term I have been focusing on using interesting vocabulary to make my writing appealing to the reader.

I learnt how to use personification which is when you give an object or an animal a human quality eg. grey clouds crying there eyes out.

Next time I will do a brainstorm before my writing so I don't repeat my ideas.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Annika I am really pleased that you spent some time to go back and visit your ideas so that you were able to identify different objects relating to autumn. Taking time to re-craft at year 6 is always going to improve your writing. Well done.